re: Bibliography

August 20, 2006 by mac209

Hello everyone.  Like Big Brother, I’ve been quietly watching what you’ve been up to.  I’ve refrained from responding because I wanted this to be a free and easy forum — and the teacher’s voice tends to stymie debate.  But someone wrote something to which I feel compelled to respond.

Q: Are we supposed to write a bibliography for the essay? And if so, I have no
publishing info or whatever on Hedda. I’ve always found these to be stupidly
complicated.

A: If you need a bibliography, then you had better include one.

Q: When do I need a bibliography? 

A: If you have consulted outside sources (other than each other) in preparing, or preparing to write, your paper.  These outside sources could be critics, on-line “study guides”, etc.

Q: Well, I did consult some of those, but only in a genreal way.  They helped me to understand the books, but I didn’t use any of their ideas in my essay.  Do I still need the bibliography?

A: Yes.

Q: I thought that was only if I was using specific ideas. 

A: If you are using specific ideas, then you have to includes footnotes (endnotes).

Q: I though that was only if I was quoting.

A:  That, too.  But if it’s somebody’s idea, even if it’s in your words, it should be endnoted.

Q: I pretty much cut and pasted the whole thing from Pink Monkey.  It’s pretty incoherent, but it’s done.  How should I handle that?

A: By starting over, from scratch.

Q: I didn’t consult any outside materials.  Should I have done so? 

A: Not if you think you have a good handle on the books on your own.  I’m more interested in original thought than in compiling what others have thought.  (That will pretty much go for the whole course, by the way.

Enjoy what’s left of your summer.  Your senior year is almost here.

By the way. . .

June 28, 2006 by mac209

Yes, there’s a movie version of The Handmaid’s Tale.  And of 1984.  I don’t think there’s one available on Hedda, but there are tons of helpful “study guides” available on the web for all three.

Use these, if you use them at all, as supplemental materials.  Do not use these materials in lieu of reading the asignments.

I have, over the years, caught a number of students (including Honors level students) plagiarizing.  I certainly hope that you will not choose this option.  If you do, however, be prepared to accept the consequences.  (It won’t be worth it.)

Margaret Atwood

June 28, 2006 by mac209

I don’t have much to say about The Handmaid’s Tale at this point. I read it when it came out, but I’m going to have to re-read it this summer.

But here’s a lecture that Atwood gave in which she discusses how she became a writer. You may find it interesting.

Total Information Awareness

June 28, 2006 by mac209

President Bush is mad at the New York TimesSo is Dick CheneySenator Jim Bunning thinks that what the Times has done is treasonous.

What has the Times done?  They published an article revealing a secret government program now known as the “Terrorist Finance Tracking Program”.   According to Secretary of the Treasury John Snow, the program is “a robust and classified effort to map terrorist networks through the use of financial data”.  By trolling through millions of financial records, the government hopes to track down and short circuit terrorist plots.

What worries the Times is that this seems to be part of a larger pattern. Times editor Bill Keller, explain why the Times chose to publish, pointed out that the Bush administration has “embarked on a number of broad, secret programs aimed at combating terrorism, often without seeking new legal authority or submitting to the usual oversight. . .  I think it would be arrogant for us to pre-empt the work of Congress and the courts by deciding these programs are perfectly legal and abuse-proof, based entirely on the word of the government.”

I daresay that most Americans would side with Bush, Cheney, Bunning, and Representative Peter King on this one.  They want to be protected from terrotists, and if that means letting the government look through our bank records, or library records, what’s the harm?  If you’re innocent, why should you care?

Well, George Orwell tells us why in 1984.

In response to the 9/11 attacks, and the “war” on terrorism that followed, the government proposed a program called “Total Information Awareness.”  Computer bots would search through all bank, credit card, library, etc. records, looking for dangerous patterns.  Then the government would spring into action.

Well, a lot of people — liberals and libertarians alike — did not like the sound of that.  It seemed like too much to give up in the way of civil liberties.  Due to public outcry, the government backed off.  (Or did they?)

If you’ve been following the news lately (and most people don’t bother), you remember reading about the government listening in on some phone calls of Americans (without getting the necessary warrants).  And you remember the government making a secret agreement with phone companies to take a look at who everybody was calling and for how long.  And you remember the government detaining an American citizen and keeping him in prison for three-and-a-half years without ever bringing a charge against him.

Now, is this the world of 1984?  Not by a long shot.  But this “war on terrorism” could go on for years and years and years (when do you declare victory?).  And who knows what else is going on in secret that the press hasn’t found out about?

1984 may seem like a long time ago, but believe me, it’s today — and maybe tomorrow.

Hedda Gabler

June 27, 2006 by mac209

You guys are getting out ahead of me.  Let me try to post a couple of quick pages so you’ll have someplace to put your comments.

Just a word of warning on Hedda.  She’s more complicated than you think (if my past experience is any indicator).  The actress Kate Burton (daughter of Richard Burton, who was a great Shakespearean actor as well as a movie star and celebrity) called Hedda “a female Hamlet.”  I’m not sure I agree with that, but she’s more than just a “mean girl“.  There are reasons for everything she does, (although sometimes they are dark to her).

Take the “bonnet incident”.  I think you can take her at face value when she tells Judge Brack that she doesn’t know why she does things like that.

For a key to understanding Hedda look closely at the nature of her relationship with Lovborg — especially in the past.

And, you might be interested in this –  Richard Eyre, getting ready to direct the play in London, has some interesting insights into the play.

What Do You Think?

June 24, 2006 by mac209

This article appeared recently in The New York Times. I was wondering what you thought about it.

School’s Waning Days

By RICK LYMAN June 22, 2006

Pay attention, please.

Yes, it is warm. And school is almost out for the summer. But stop fidgeting. We have material to cover.

“You can feel it, as soon as the weather gets nice,” said Alicia Buzzi, a principal intern from the New York City Leadership Academy. “The tone of the whole school changes, the pace, everything.”

Parents feel it. Administrators feel it. The students and the teachers certainly feel it — something about the end of testing, the arrival of summer heat and the approaching final day of school in the city next Wednesday — once impossibly distant but suddenly tantalizingly close.

“There are this many days until school is over,” said Ramira Rivera, 9, a second grader at Public School 112 in East Harlem, holding up a few fingers and then pointing to one of them. “And this one is a barbecue.”

Fewer days are spent on traditional classroom instruction.

Instead, there are pageants, award ceremonies, pizza parties, talent shows and more activities outdoors — picnics and field trip after field trip.

“Of course, as the weather starts getting nice, the kids start getting real excited,” said Audra St. John, Ramira’s teacher. “The thing is to try to harness that excitement and turn it into learning.”

New York City school officials consider P.S. 112 particularly good at coping with the children’s June fever.

“I find that at the end of the school year, there is so much more energy and they can really be more motivated,” said Laurie Etienne, a second-grade teacher. “Certainly, they’re more excited.”

One challenge is keeping that energy manageable. “Some of our teachers will play Mozart or Beethoven to calm them down,” said Eileen Reiter, P.S. 112’s principal. “Or there are some who use yoga techniques, like breathing exercises.”

Ms. St. John said she tried playing classical music, but it did not work. “Something about the rhythm,” she said. “They got more excited.” Instead, she uses deep-breathing exercises and other yogalike focusing techniques.

“We do this one thing where they stand beside their desks, put their hands on the desktop and push down, like they’re trying to push the desk through the floor,” Ms. St. John said. “Usually, after that, they calm down.”

Such techniques are used now and then throughout the school year, she said, but more and more often as the end of school approaches.

Ms. Reiter said she forbids the removal of any artwork from the school’s hallways, so as not to send children the message that a little slacking off is in the air.

“We don’t give up,” she said. “There’s a lot of learning that goes on in June. You know, four weeks is a lot of time for kids.”

To some parents, it seems little is being accomplished in a school year’s closing weeks. Leslie R. Williams, a professor of education at Teachers College at Columbia University, disagrees.

She said the year-end shift in tone is not only inevitable, but also beneficial. “Once the testing schedule is over, there is a great opportunity for doing things like field trips and more exploration of the community,” Professor Williams said. “It’s a way of consolidating learning.”

Too many parents have the notion that schooling consists solely of traditional classroom instruction, supplemented by homework and measured by testing, she said.

“But this is a time of looking back and a time of looking forward,” Professor Williams said. “And that’s a very important thing for the kids. It’s not doing nothing, as so many people believe.”

Pamela Wheaton, deputy director of the insideschools.org project for Advocates for Children of New York, which regularly visits and assesses the city’s public schools, said the field trips and other activities were appropriate for June.

“I’ve been to some classes,” she said, “where, when the tests are over, they just sit down the kids and put on a video. I can’t stand to see that.”

The issue of maintaining focus in a term’s final days is bigger in elementary schools, said Maria Dewald, president of the New York State Congress of Parents and Teachers. In higher grades, final exams and other year-end activities tend to keep attention from wavering too much.

“But for the young ones, when the weather gets nice, it can be difficult,” said Dolores Boston, the mother of a P.S. 112 first grader. “But it’s also nice, because the kids are happier. You can feel it around the school, a happier atmosphere.”

As a year-end activity, Ms. St. John and Ms. Etienne, the P.S. 112 teachers, encouraged students to pick a reading and writing project of special interest to them.

“We picked math because we like math,” said Azid Lloyd, 9, as he sprawled on the floor, finishing the making of a “math dictionary” with his 7-year-old partner, Maya Walker.

He glanced out the window. “On Friday, we have a picnic in Jefferson Park,” he said. “And then school is over and you know what?”

Maya widened her eyes excitedly and said, “What?”

Azid paused, casually brushing scraps of paper from his Yankees jersey. “Then,” he said, “I’m going to Florida.”

Across the room, Amiya Scott and Nathan Foster, both 8, were clipping photographs from magazines and pasting them into books about fashion. “We’re doing a magazine of our own,” Nathan said.

Ramira Rivera was with two other girls, huddled over a computer, writing their own story about Geronimo Stilton, a mouse journalist for The Rodent’s Gazette, who stars in a series of books they had read. In their story, he is fighting Lava Man.

“He’s evil,” explained Dazhane Bryant, 7. “That’s what makes it exciting.”

The poet T. S. Eliot once said that April was the cruelest month. How would he have felt as a second grader, stuck in a classroom while a spectacular summer blossomed? Might he have chosen June instead?

“I don’t know,” Ramira said. “I like June. It gets hot most of the time, and you can go to the park. And plus, you always know that school is almost over.”

Any final questions?

Very well, see you in September. Class dismissed.

Copyright 2006 The New York Times Company

Early Birds and Eager Beavers.

June 16, 2006 by mac209

All right.  Any of you early birds rushing to check out the blog so far?  First one to check in and post a comment gets a –  we'll think of something.

                                                 Mr. Mac